View Full Version : New Storytelling Thread #2
Storytelling is fun. Especially if you get many people adding to it with no rhyme or reason.
This time we are limited to 5 words each and if we have a question or comment I have started a seperate thread so we don't diminish the flow of the story. Also, please use punctuation where applicable......sound good? Let's get started!!!!
First five words:
Snow wasn't going to deter
tic chick
02-02-2007, 01:03 PM
Marlena from getting to her
houghchrst
02-02-2007, 01:47 PM
first class for advanced yoga.
mpalmer118
02-02-2007, 03:03 PM
Especially since the yoga master,
hailed directly from India and
houghchrst
02-02-2007, 04:57 PM
was rumored to be hot!
As she contemplated her wardrobe,
houghchrst
02-02-2007, 07:56 PM
the neighbors began yelling at
tic chick
02-02-2007, 09:33 PM
Marlena to close her blinds!
mpalmer118
02-02-2007, 10:20 PM
Flustered and embarassed Marlena dived
houghchrst
02-02-2007, 10:55 PM
behind the nearby closet door.
tic chick
02-03-2007, 01:29 AM
There she contemplated her wardrobe
winnie
02-03-2007, 02:41 AM
and searched for her 'Uggs'.
houghchrst
02-03-2007, 12:26 PM
LOL Ok I have no clue as to what Uggs are so I gess I bess go look it up and get back to ya.
houghchrst
02-03-2007, 01:48 PM
Suddenly the smoke alarm started
mpalmer118
02-03-2007, 02:43 PM
so Marlene grabbed her bag,
houghchrst
02-03-2007, 02:47 PM
then remembered she was nude
(how come nobody put clothes on poor MarlenE LOL)
winnie
02-03-2007, 04:47 PM
so she grabbed first available
houghchrst
02-03-2007, 05:23 PM
and ran for the door.
winnie
02-03-2007, 07:51 PM
Upon opening the door she
noticed her handsome yoga instructor
houghchrst
02-03-2007, 09:00 PM
and thought what a lousy
winnie
02-03-2007, 10:09 PM
time for a smoke alarm.
houghchrst
02-03-2007, 10:21 PM
"What a surprise" she said,
winnie
02-04-2007, 11:10 AM
& Rajiv, ( the yoga master) smiled his 'smile'.
houghchrst
02-04-2007, 11:43 AM
Stupid alarm, she thought, if
Rajiv could help her then,
houghchrst
02-04-2007, 12:09 PM
she would be indebted to
this handsome hot hunk, forever.
houghchrst
02-04-2007, 01:42 PM
Suddenly, from behind Rajiv, appeared
Marlene's roomate, wanting her coat. (remember, Marlene grabed a coat out of the closet & ran for the door)
tic chick
02-04-2007, 05:02 PM
Marlena blushed, then said, flirtaciously,
winnie
02-04-2007, 06:36 PM
" Rajiv! How timely you are".
houghchrst
02-04-2007, 07:40 PM
"Seems something is on fire."
winnie
02-04-2007, 08:07 PM
The roomate laughed at the innuendo.
"I'm nude again!" Marlene cried.
winnie
02-04-2007, 09:49 PM
The roomie rolled her eyes.
houghchrst
02-04-2007, 11:20 PM
Rajiv gave Marlene his jacket
(shouldn't we be leaving the premises in here somewhere lol... after all something must be burning)
winnie
02-04-2007, 11:35 PM
and approaching sirens were heard.
( true houghchrst..however..all that could of taken all of 25-30 seconds;))
houghchrst
02-04-2007, 11:46 PM
Suddenly firemen were everywhere and
winnie
02-05-2007, 12:09 AM
a backyard brushfire gained strength.
houghchrst
02-05-2007, 11:24 AM
Rajiv was kind enough to
rescue Marlene, her roomate and
take Marlene to his apartment
tic chick
02-05-2007, 04:15 PM
where he cooked chicken tandoori
and they practiced yoga privately!
First she needed new clothes
winnie
02-05-2007, 07:08 PM
& her Insurance agents number.
houghchrst
02-05-2007, 07:14 PM
Knocking at Rajiv's door was
winnie
02-06-2007, 12:26 AM
his nosey next door neighbour.
houghchrst
02-06-2007, 12:30 AM
" I see you have friends"
winnie
02-06-2007, 07:00 AM
said Gladys. While Rajiv responded,
houghchrst
02-06-2007, 09:49 AM
"Thanks for dropping in, Goodbye."
Seems like Gladys is always the perfect name for the nosy neighbor.
"Now for the Chicken Tandoori!"
houghchrst
02-06-2007, 03:37 PM
After eating they decided to
winnie
02-06-2007, 07:59 PM
have an indulgent dessert.;)
Strawberries dipped in rich chocolate.
winnie
02-06-2007, 10:04 PM
"Baileys"? Rajiv offered Marlene, winking.
"No thankyou", Marlene quietly whispered.
winnie
02-07-2007, 12:29 AM
" Thats a first!", offered Rajiv.
"I'd rather do something else".
houghchrst
02-07-2007, 10:08 PM
Suddenly the door burst in
Ingwaz
02-08-2007, 12:40 AM
and Rajiv's half-wild pet,
(thought I would join in, this is a hoot!)
Ali, his beloved banjara hound.
(lol, Ali is my Dr.s LAST name & his native land is Pakistan. A banjara hound is an Indian dog.)
(Sorry, I was reading it as 'Sudenly, in the door burst Rajiv's half-wild pet,)
winnie
02-08-2007, 07:50 PM
Marlene was startled, when Ali
houghchrst
02-08-2007, 11:47 PM
jumped on her and began
winnie
02-09-2007, 12:24 AM
licking her face of tandoori smell.
"That tickles" (hehehe) Marlene laughed shyly.
Ingwaz
02-09-2007, 04:37 PM
"Be careful," Rajiv warned; "She's
not used to sharing me."
(My DH just came home after 3 weeks, Minnie is going crazy with joy and the puppy, who was real young when he left, doesn't know what to do. Dogs have feelings too :) )
winnie
02-10-2007, 03:20 PM
either, stated Marlene with emphasis.
"Well I'm all yours babe,
winnie
02-10-2007, 07:36 PM
regardless of Ali, "priorities Rajiv".
houghchrst
02-11-2007, 12:12 PM
Rajiv put the dog out.
(Alright you guys, where is the excitement here? You know, the blood, guns, sex, violence, mystery, intrigue. This reads like a bad romance novel or uneventful adult movie, this story need some help even if I am having a great time doing it)
tic chick
02-11-2007, 01:31 PM
Marlena moved closer to Rajiv
lol...houghchrst :)
winnie
02-11-2007, 02:49 PM
his chest, of Minnie Mouse.
houghchrst
02-11-2007, 03:32 PM
She burst out laughing hysterically.
winnie
02-11-2007, 04:43 PM
"Rajiv, your 'surprises' are fabulous"!
tic chick
02-11-2007, 08:07 PM
"Can I show YOU something?"
winnie
02-11-2007, 08:21 PM
Marlene proceeded to reveal her 'something',
houghchrst
02-11-2007, 10:13 PM
which was a tattoo of
winnie
02-11-2007, 10:50 PM
lo and behold, Mickey Mouse!
winnie
02-12-2007, 12:06 AM
Marlene's naval, with piercing included.
Raj couldn't believe his eyes!
"Anything else to show me?"
Before Marlene could answer Raj
Ingwaz
02-12-2007, 04:17 PM
sereneded, Andrew Llyod Webber style.
winnie
02-12-2007, 08:13 PM
Marlene then lit scented candles.
winnie
02-13-2007, 05:48 PM
smokin sale from Victorias Secret.
Ingwaz
02-14-2007, 09:02 PM
"Oh my, oh, lovely," Rajiv
winnie
02-14-2007, 09:56 PM
cooed, as his eyes scanned
her flowing brown hair and
winnie
02-15-2007, 06:52 PM
travelled down to the tatoo.
He reached out to Marlene.
tic chick
02-15-2007, 09:13 PM
"Come here and kiss my
MInnie and run your fingers
winnie
02-15-2007, 11:31 PM
wherever your 'chi' directs you.
Let your hair flow wherever
houghchrst
02-16-2007, 10:53 AM
my chakras need your touch.
Concentrate on my anahata for
houghchrst
02-16-2007, 12:12 PM
my heart is all yours.
Nice one bon!!
winnie
02-16-2007, 07:05 PM
Marlene was pleasantly surprised with
lovingly warm touch and his
winnie
02-17-2007, 12:10 AM
piercing deep brown eyes locked
tic chick
02-17-2007, 02:02 PM
into hers. "What's next Marlena?"
winnie
02-17-2007, 03:00 PM
She paused, tossed her hair
and sighed, maybe Mickey could
represent something special for them.
winnie
02-17-2007, 08:34 PM
Mar-Raj! ( not mirage) resulted.
tic chick
02-18-2007, 01:12 PM
"Do you think we could..."
lol, winnie....you reading a lot about brangelina and vaughniston? :D
winnie
02-18-2007, 01:43 PM
omg! I never even thought of THAT! Just made sense when ya combined the names .lol.
.........be frankly honest?", purred Marlena.
Ingwaz
02-18-2007, 11:44 PM
"Truth is, I am secretly
winnie
02-19-2007, 01:18 AM
trying to win your heart.
winnie
02-19-2007, 05:01 PM
money for Yoga lessons, but
tic chick
02-19-2007, 09:45 PM
now I feel your sincerity.
winnie
02-19-2007, 09:53 PM
And I am blown away.
Suze E Que
02-19-2007, 10:42 PM
Still I know there's more
( I wanna play! :) )
please share your tender love.
I've something to tell you,
tic chick
02-20-2007, 07:47 PM
"Marlena said softly. I have
winnie
02-20-2007, 08:03 PM
Hep C from the tatoo".
"Don't cry hun" he whispered.
Suze E Que
02-20-2007, 10:25 PM
I have a secret too.
winnie
02-21-2007, 01:40 AM
"That I can't share yet."
houghchrst
02-21-2007, 11:21 AM
"You'll find out soon enough."
I am sorry but I had to laugh, Hep C, that is great, well not for her but ....
"It must be serious too",
(My brother has hepatitis & a tatoo, also)
said Marlene, wiping a tear.
winnie
02-21-2007, 05:53 PM
However, her curiousity was peaking.
tic chick
02-21-2007, 08:15 PM
"Rajiv, please tell me now!"
Suze E Que
02-21-2007, 08:26 PM
He hung his head, "well"
"Now mine doesn't seem bad".
houghchrst
02-22-2007, 09:34 AM
Marlene stomped her foot petulantly,
(sorry Lor, guess I stuck my foot in, my brother in law has it too but he got his sharing needles)
winnie
02-22-2007, 10:16 AM
announcing, " this is not fair!"
"Marlene dear, It's just that
(thats OK, it's just that it really isn't that outragous) (I didn't realize till I was just done, that I said "it's just that", twice)
tic chick
02-22-2007, 01:45 PM
"my parents arranged a marriage..."
winnie
02-22-2007, 03:17 PM
....and I am engaged now".
houghchrst
02-22-2007, 07:42 PM
" I will have to go..
Suze E Que
02-22-2007, 09:08 PM
have a seat on the
tic chick
02-23-2007, 10:20 PM
"chaise and lets talk more."
Suze E Que
02-23-2007, 11:54 PM
"about this tragdy and how"
houghchrst
02-24-2007, 10:24 AM
said "But I am in ....
love with my sexy student."
houghchrst
02-24-2007, 05:25 PM
Marlene turned away and said,
"Calm down and stop that."
tic chick
02-24-2007, 10:11 PM
"There must be a way..."
houghchrst
02-25-2007, 09:55 AM
"Let's change our identities and ...
Suze E Que
02-25-2007, 02:28 PM
go to the BMV and
houghchrst
02-26-2007, 10:22 AM
Sorry Suze E Que but not too sure what the BMV is. Do you mean the DMV (Department of Motor Vehicles)?
Suze E Que
02-26-2007, 08:05 PM
Yeah - it's the "Bureau" of Motor vehicles here. I guess they think they're too fancy to just be a department. LOL
Sorry....
houghchrst
02-26-2007, 10:57 PM
get new licenses and passports.....
No problem, LOL who knows with the government Suze E Que, just wanted to be sure before I added anything.
I have no idea where we get passports from.
Suze E Que
02-26-2007, 11:54 PM
Then we can go to
(not sure about passports either... we'll say the BMV/DMV) ;)
houghchrst
02-27-2007, 10:15 AM
the bank and withdraw all
Suze E Que
02-27-2007, 11:23 PM
of my college tuition money
"We mustn't dear" said Rajiv.
tic chick
02-28-2007, 12:58 PM
"I am an honorable man..."
Suze E Que
02-28-2007, 08:23 PM
I can't allow you to
do that, you've almost graduated".
Suze E Que
02-28-2007, 10:50 PM
graduated shmaduated. The important thing
tic chick
03-01-2007, 11:21 PM
..."MARLENA! Stop this ridiculous nonsense!"
Suze E Que
03-02-2007, 10:38 PM
"You call this nonsense?" I
houghchrst
03-03-2007, 10:45 AM
...suddenly from behind Rajiv appeared
upset with the whole situation.
Suze E Que
03-04-2007, 12:16 AM
He turned to Marlene and...
(lol lor)
tic chick
03-04-2007, 12:59 AM
said, "I'm going to India...
Suze E Que
03-04-2007, 11:40 PM
to fast and achieve enlightenment
but first we need passports.
Suze E Que
03-06-2007, 11:55 PM
we got them at DMV
By computer we booked flights.
tic chick
03-07-2007, 04:18 PM
Then Marlena changed her mind.
Suze E Que
03-07-2007, 08:58 PM
She hesitantly approched Rajiv and
houghchrst
03-07-2007, 10:57 PM
said "give me $300,000 or ......
winnie
03-08-2007, 12:46 AM
I will be charged w/arsen!". ( remember her property was on fire?)
houghchrst
03-08-2007, 10:48 AM
"Did you start the fire?"
Suze E Que
03-08-2007, 08:37 PM
What do you think Rajiv!?!
I asked you first Marlene.
tic chick
03-09-2007, 11:06 AM
"I am a serial pyromaniac...
houghchrst
03-09-2007, 10:54 PM
accidently burned my last lover...
Suze E Que
03-09-2007, 11:09 PM
She said as she looked
houghchrst
03-10-2007, 01:14 PM
innocently at Rajiv. " I was ..
Suze E Que
03-10-2007, 11:58 PM
just trying to light his
winnie
03-11-2007, 03:29 PM
candle, not his heart!"
Suze E Que
03-11-2007, 05:58 PM
"Then the next thing I
houghchrst
03-12-2007, 09:57 AM
his toupee was on fire.....
(It says here "Then the next thing I his toupee was on fire..... )
houghchrst
03-12-2007, 08:11 PM
(you are right lor, I thought it said, the next thing I knew, well so much for that let's change it to )
knew his toupee was on...
Suze E Que
03-12-2007, 08:48 PM
the ground in flames and
tic chick
03-13-2007, 12:19 AM
the fire was spreading to
houghchrst
03-13-2007, 12:50 PM
his house but I didn't ...
winnie
03-13-2007, 10:13 PM
So I left, & watched.
Suze E Que
03-13-2007, 10:43 PM
The flames were just mesmerizing
houghchrst
03-14-2007, 12:21 PM
I realized then that I
tic chick
03-14-2007, 02:59 PM
loved fire, loved it's power
Suze E Que
03-14-2007, 08:34 PM
and the power it gave
winnie
03-14-2007, 09:12 PM
an appeal, unlike any I
tic chick
03-15-2007, 12:10 AM
had previously experienced in life.
houghchrst
03-15-2007, 09:31 AM
So when you had knocked
Suze E Que
03-15-2007, 11:28 PM
strange how you just appeared
winnie
03-17-2007, 11:49 PM
in myfire setting experience!
Suze E Que
03-18-2007, 10:15 PM
and it makes me wonder
Suze E Que
03-20-2007, 10:47 PM
And why I burn with
winnie
03-20-2007, 11:31 PM
this uncanny desire to take
tic chick
03-21-2007, 04:23 PM
action on my mania and
Suze E Que
03-21-2007, 10:52 PM
will help me to do
winnie
03-24-2007, 02:48 PM
exactly what needs to happen.
Suze E Que
03-26-2007, 10:47 PM
The twelve step program for
tic chick
03-27-2007, 01:23 AM
pyromaniacs is a bit different
Suze E Que
03-28-2007, 12:16 AM
but still effective I hear
tic chick
04-12-2007, 03:47 PM
. Make a decision Marlena or...
Suze E Que
04-16-2007, 09:17 PM
I will be forced to
dampen the flames of passion.
Suze E Que
04-18-2007, 10:16 PM
Rajiv said as he looked
tic chick
04-19-2007, 01:38 AM
at Marlena with cold eyes
Suze E Que
04-23-2007, 11:16 PM
Don't you look at me...
tic chick
04-24-2007, 11:58 PM
Rajiv, you've got a lot
Suze E Que
04-26-2007, 10:30 PM
You need help Marlena. Don't
tic chick
04-27-2007, 01:01 AM
burn your chance at happiness
Suze E Que
04-27-2007, 10:39 PM
like you burn everything else
Suze E Que
04-30-2007, 12:01 AM
She knew in her heart
tic chick
04-30-2007, 01:24 AM
she couldn't stop lighting fires.
"Let's just forget all this".
Suze E Que
04-30-2007, 11:08 PM
I know I will never
tic chick
05-01-2007, 07:22 PM
completely earn your trust. So,.....
maybe we should simply part.
Suze E Que
05-01-2007, 11:14 PM
Marlena, I don't know that
tic chick
05-02-2007, 10:41 AM
but I'll go to India.....
tic chick
05-03-2007, 08:48 PM
Rajiv, do the right thing
Suze E Que
05-03-2007, 11:20 PM
but I must tell you
tic chick
05-04-2007, 01:49 AM
i cannot change for you
Suze E Que
05-10-2007, 10:57 PM
You must accept the fact
tic chick
05-11-2007, 12:54 PM
that fire excites me more
Suze E Que
05-14-2007, 10:29 PM
than anything you could ever
possibly think or dream of.
In India, I will build you
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