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low_tide
05-11-2008, 01:02 AM
Brain Connections
Danielle Schnupp

I hear the sound of water moving in my brain
Like a musical amplifier
And I have no button to adjust the volume!
It interferes with oncoming sounds
Like a one-way traffic;
No more place for extra words to come in

What is going on?
My sinuses are in a world of their own
Totally blocking further brain connections
My ear drums are sort of dancing
To the tempo of the new waves hitting the shore
My ship has no more direction
No one aboard to navigate in those deep waters

I feel like a recording artist making a soundtrack
Without the equipment
Splish, splash…
I should enjoy this intriguing cadence
But the flooding pressure (high tide) makes it unbearable.
I am at the beach and I can only hear the water.
But where is the water?
Can’t see it; can only hear it

Sound is so distorted:
Crowds, people, voices… It is so loud!
Cannot remember whatever anyone is saying
Why?
Loosing information rapidly
And, at times, my hearing is gone
What is happening to me?
Walking without balance, missing my normal steps,
Space is changing place.
Why?

Flashes of colors sometimes
Islands maybe, or guiding lights
If only someone could carry me
I must reach out to a safe Port
Splish, splash…
I am feeling so sleepy
Splish splash…
Please waves,
Keep me awake a little longer.
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In 2000, I was diagnosed with Hydrocephalus n.p.h. I drove myself to the hospital, which looking back I would not recommend. I somehow felt the urgency at the time, and those flashes of colour were not islands, they were circulation traffic lights… red, green, yellow. Well, it turns out that Someone was looking out for me. Today I am blessed to use colours to express the beauty of each day. A palette and few brushes can make you travel within and discover another purpose. Every day brings a different scenery… we must pay attention to those fine details around us!

http://brain.hastypastry.net/%7Ehosobuchi/Community/low_tide/Brain_Connections.jpg

waves
05-12-2008, 07:34 AM
beautiful poem! may your tides remain calm today :)

~ waves ~ no pun intended :D

p.s. i did not understand if there was a painting / graphic supposed to be attached also? if so, it appears to be missing...

low_tide
05-13-2008, 01:33 PM
thanks Waves ...you are wright ;their is a painting that will be added to the text ....had to get some practical pointers on how to transfer the image .After a high tide incident ,i must refresh the memory for those difficult transfer of graphic in the forum.

low_tide
05-13-2008, 07:22 PM
Thank you David in your help transferring my painting of low tides in the forum smooth waters ....it is very kind of you !!

Lavandula Canadensis
05-13-2008, 09:13 PM
low_tide,
thank you for sharing this part of your life experience with us, deep from your brain and from heart...
today, this is your birthday, and you are the one giving us this beautiful gift... well, what a world...
here is something special for you today...

HAPPY AND COLORFUL BIRTHDAY !!! http://bestsmileys.com/ballons/8.gif http://bestsmileys.com/ballons/3.gif http://bestsmileys.com/ballons/8.gif

low_tide
05-15-2008, 01:03 PM
Thanks Lavandula,...for your colourful wishes and for the green jumping friend !That is very sweet !Colours are so precious ,they are brighten them up my day !Danielle !