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Firehorse
03-23-2008, 12:32 AM
Aura Awakening
for the members of BrainTalk Communities Epilepsy forum.

3/22/08

in the beginning naive, if they'd come presently
awareness extreme, suddenly as if not by me
In terror first understood, the warning I faced
"That's the key!" I realized, as my mind raced
Eureka! I felt, taking pause to rejoice
attempting a scream, but it came, stole my voice
as my mind lost all reason, the world turned to black
I fell to the floor, knowing when they'd come back

armed with a wisdom, acquired that day
yearning to battle, to keep them at bay
lessons from years past, still holding so true
at times feeling frightened, not sure what to do
to know when they'll come, a help to be sure
not being a victim, not having endure
my goal in the end, not for me but for all
a means to be found, for us not to fall

arrest, distract, subdue, or dispel?
how does one fight what controls touch, & smell?
a mountain to climb, its peak clouded by mist
unknown to the eye, recognized by its fist
it hits; captured; you know; what to do?
eyes opened, crowd asking, "How are you?"
ourselves the victims, of terrors unseen
longing for life, where all is serene

at contest against them, I shall rely
in raising my inner-self, in battle cry
for I am determined, to silence my fear
each time I feel them, as they draw near
to fight them each time, make them leave the scene
aren't they the monsters, aren't they being mean?
taking control of ones nerves, acting "sans" consent
this type of behavior, surely not heaven sent
our bodies! our minds! ours to direct!
in keeping with this, I aim to protect!

thousands of monsters, have stared in my eyes
and taken my consciousness, with their cold guise
decades have past, since the first look
but never have I, closed a page on this book
a fight to the end, it was then and shall be
after twenty five years, I find something for me
it ends not there, my goal not complete
there yet remains, a huge task at my feet

yes! it seems now I find, that it can be
most times I can make, that monster flee
still feeling that terror, all as before
now practiced feeling, each tactic more
I play his game, of chess "of the mind"
and kick him in his, "proverbial behind"
somehow I do this, in my own way
I'm closer to knowing, I can not yet say

this blessing, a miracle come true
out of an aura, a journey grew
journey continuing, goal unabated
withhold to, what others have waited?
nay! a peak left to climb, one task to fulfill
struggle ends not here, and finish I will
one thing remains, I give my solemn vow
the adventure is over, when I can explain how

*fire*rodeo

This poem (coincidently my first as well) was inspired by the events I remember from the first time I realized I was having an aura about 25 years ago, and from that, my attempt & eventual success at learning to find a cognitive way to fight simple partial seizures from becoming larger seizures. Though that "aura" described in the first stanza of the poem actually only lasted less than ten seconds... I can remember it in perfect detail like yesterday. I was a teenager at dinner with my family, felt the "aura", & for the first time realized I was going to have a seizure beforehand. I rushed to stand up & yell but could not get out intelligible speech. I then fell back down in a tonic clonic seizure.

waves
04-26-2008, 01:20 AM
poignant this was... and i mean that in the best way.

as i'm sure that first experience was and realization on the way "out."

my first and only "full" aura preceding a "solitary" (i don't usually have them) CP was very frightening, tho beautiful in the beginning. perhaps i shall write about it too... when i find the words... words were rather out of the "picture" at the time lol... and even the picture gave in in the end.

btw, i say full aura because i have mild ones - different kind tho - sometimes before migraines, or silent migraines (no headache, just the sparkles or river auras). this time (above) it wasn't migraine, after a wild rainbow thing i lost right motor control (crumpled down), had obfuscated vision and only vague intermittent (as revealed later) awareness of what was going on - all amuck. lucky i couldn't really see faces any more, only bobbing sea of people parts in the crowded place i was in :p better that way, i'm sure the expressions weren't pretty! with motor control recovered i went totally "white-blind" for a minute or so and speech was ... well, it wasn't. lucky i had someone with me.

not a very poetic description mine, but perhaps at some point... it might deserve one. it might better define, "depict"ure.

well done David... your poem was quite gripping!

~ waves ~

Toad
05-05-2008, 06:28 PM
Firehorse,

I am glad to see you posted this over here also, it is quite wonderful and I hope not your last.

you have quite a talent my friend. hope you are well

as I had said before and it still holds true:
Chills down back of head, all of my back and arms; my friend that is now one of my favorite poems.

Identify with it, save remembering the first aura I had.

Examples:

Chess, expressed in your poem’s context, (for me) the pain staking efforts of our trails and tribulations in ways I could never have expressed so well; wow.

This being your first (had to go read yet again just to structure an appropriate response other than “wow” again), keep writing as that is exquisite, and you are a natural; thank you for sharing it.

To me, it gives the first guided tour for the path, for those yet to follow it, succinctly; in a concise manner.

All while, composed so well.


todd