Wasted words

[dyslimbic]

Wasted words and shattered hopes
a desperate clinging to life's ropes
You thought this time the tide had turned
no more mistakes all lessons learned

It's been this way so many times before
the same old tempo,the same old worn out score
The sunshine blinds you to the rain
the pleasure blinds you to the pain

[Ponygirl]

You really are talented!!:)

Phyllis:)

[waves]

so sad, so expressive. can touch those feelings.

((( Tim )))

[Toad]

originality in responses for great poems seems the most difficult part of enjoying another's verse; wonderful poem.

todd